Chapter XI: How Stories Work

Contains spoilers

Overview

Gabriel reeled from being judged a frailblood after the Gauntlet and clashed with fellow initiates Aaron de Coste and de Séverin, with Theo Petit intervening. In the frame narrative, Gabriel and the vampire historian Jean-François debated the war, the nature of glory, and the vampire plan, prompting Gabriel to deduce the Empress seeks the Grail to win against rival bloodlines. Defying the historian’s chronology, Gabriel insisted on skipping ahead to recount the Grail, declaring this is how his story must be told.

Summary

After being deemed “disappointing” in the Trial of the Blood, Gabriel returned to the Barracks, stung by Seraph Talon’s judgment and others’ scorn. Aaron de Coste and the initiate de Séverin confronted him, mocking his lack of a bloodline and his lowborn origins. Gabriel defended his mother’s honor and his resolve as a paleblood to fight, but Aaron belittled the Order’s importance, claiming the imperial Golden Host would defeat the Forever King and that San Michon existed only by imperial whim.

Gabriel argued faith and fate kept him in the Order, but Aaron asserted Gabriel would amount to nothing. Theo Petit then arrived, insulted the nobles’ pretensions, and warned Aaron not to speak lightly of Theo’s master’s death by sangirè. The confrontation cooled with traded barbs, and Gabriel silently thanked Theo. Left alone with his thoughts, Gabriel admitted he still felt called by God despite his failure and lack of gifts, even as he realized an ugly truth: he selfishly prayed the war would not end before he could join it.

The narrative shifted to the present interrogation. Gabriel and Jean-François debated glory and death, the slaughter at Augustin, and the undead. Jean-François claimed vampires’ dead stay dead while humans rise against them; Gabriel argued that the wretched and four highblood kiths would starve the world and would not surrender their corpse armies easily.

Reading the vampire’s stance, Gabriel deduced the imperial motive: they sought the Grail to gain advantage over the other bloodlines. Jean-François denied interest in “children’s stories” and pressed Gabriel to continue his chronological apprenticeship tale, challenging how a lowborn paleblood became the famed Black Lion and then fell so far. A visceral memory of forbidden desire flickered through Gabriel, but he refused to return to San Michon’s story just then.

Asserting control over the telling, Gabriel declared he would jump ahead to the day he found the Grail—how it came to him, how he lost it, and everything between—promising the Empress would have her answers in time and that the tale would circle back to Lorson, the Charbourg, Augustin, and San Michon. After a tense pause, Jean-François reluctantly agreed. Gabriel concluded the chapter by stating his Grail story began with “a rabbit hole.”

Who Appears

  • Gabriel de León
    narrator/protagonist; reels from being judged a frailblood, quarrels with Aaron, reflects on ambition and fate; deduces the imperial aim for the Grail; asserts control of the narrative.
  • Jean-François (of the Blood Chastain)
    vampire historian/interrogator; debates war and undead with Gabriel, denies interest in the Grail yet concedes to Gabriel’s narrative jump.
  • Master Greyhand
    Gabriel’s mentor; present by mention, stoic after Gabriel’s failed Trial.
  • Seraph Talon de Montfort
    Order luminary; his “disappointing” judgment lingers over Gabriel.
  • Forgemaster Argyle
    Order smith; his scowl is recalled by Gabriel post-Trial.
  • Prioress Charlotte
    leader of the Silver Priory; her disapproval is noted by Gabriel.
  • Aaron de Coste
    senior initiate; taunts Gabriel, belittles the Order’s relevance, cites his brother in the Golden Host.
  • De Séverin
    initiate; Aaron’s ally who mocks Gabriel and Theo.
  • Theo Petit
    initiate; rebukes Aaron and de Séverin, warns Aaron not to slight his late master, implicitly supports Gabriel.
  • Jean-Luc de Coste
    Aaron’s brother; mentioned as a chevalier in the Golden Host.
  • Empress Isabella
    imperial consort; mentioned as favoring mysticism, used to explain monastery funding.
  • Emperor Alexandre
    ruler; mentioned in Aaron’s crude claim about court politics.
  • Fabién Voss (Forever King)
    antagonist; discussed as the target of imperial and Order efforts.
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