We Used to Live Here
by Marcus Kliewer
Contents
1. Outsiders
Overview
Eve Palmer is confronted by an unannounced family claiming the father grew up in her house and asking for a tour. Her paranoia and people-pleasing instincts collide as she tries, and fails, to set a clear boundary without leaning on her absent girlfriend, Charlie. After initially refusing, Eve is swayed by guilt and invites the family back in, opening the door to whatever consequences their visit will bring.
Summary
On a cold Friday night, Eve Palmer answers an unexpected doorbell and finds a family of five on her doorstep. The father says he grew up in the house and asks to give his children a quick tour. Eve is immediately uneasy, partly because the request is intrusive and partly because she notices there is no car in sight, forcing the family to explain that they parked down on the road and walked up the icy driveway.
Eve’s anxiety intensifies as her attention fixes on small details and worst-case possibilities. Her long-standing paranoia, personified in her mind as “Mo,” warns that letting the family in could be dangerous. Even so, Eve’s people-pleasing nature makes it hard for her to refuse directly, so she falls back on her usual tactic of saying she needs to check with her girlfriend, Charlie.
When the father asks if the family can at least wait in the foyer because of the cold, Eve reluctantly lets them inside despite her rising fear. In the living room, she calls Charlie, but only reaches Charlie’s joking voicemail. Left to handle the situation herself, Eve tries to gather the courage to set a boundary without using Charlie as a shield.
Back in the foyer, Eve still cannot fully own the refusal and claims that her girlfriend says no. The father accepts the answer politely, gives Eve a business card for “Faust’s Photolab,” and suggests arranging a visit in advance another time. His calm response undercuts Eve’s fear, while also deepening her embarrassment about how awkwardly she handled the encounter.
As the family starts to leave, Eve notices that the mother seems relieved, the boys are indifferent, and the youngest daughter, Jenny, is visibly disappointed. Watching them walk away, Eve is overwhelmed by guilt for turning them down and for relying on Charlie as an excuse. Acting on that guilt, Eve calls them back and agrees to let them tour the house for fifteen minutes.
Who Appears
- Eve PalmerAnxious homeowner whose paranoia and people-pleasing make her struggle to refuse the family.
- The fatherPolite stranger who says he grew up in the house and asks to show it to his children.
- CharlieEve’s girlfriend, absent during the encounter but central to Eve’s conflict-avoidance habit.
- JennyYoung daughter whose visible disappointment helps push Eve into changing her mind.
- The motherBlond, watchful woman in the visiting family who appears relieved when they leave.
- MoEve’s imagined voice of paranoia, warning that letting the family inside is dangerous.
- The older boyPreteen son who snarks at his younger sister and mostly stays detached.
- The other boySecond son in the family, present during the visit request but with little direct action.