Blood Over Bright Haven
by M. L. Wang
Contents
Chapter 10: Far Afield
Overview
Thomil identifies the mapped "Otherrealm" as the Kwen and the siphoning light as Blight, forcing Sciona into a brutal confrontation over religion, empire, and the human cost of Tiranish magic. When Sciona tests his claim herself, she remotely maims a young woman at a distant shore and can no longer deny that sourcing destroys real human lives. The chapter shatters Sciona’s faith in Tiran’s moral foundation and breaks her relationship with Thomil into open rage and horror.
Summary
After Thomil bolts from the laboratory, Sciona finds him shaking in a stairwell. Thomil insists that the white spiral from Sciona’s siphoning spell is Blight itself and that the landscape in the mapping coil was not the Otherrealm but the Southern Kwen. To prove that he knows what he is describing, Thomil recounts watching Blight kill his father and later his sister near Tiran’s barrier. Sciona, unable to accept that Tiranish magic could be feeding on real people, argues that God may simply show each viewer a subjective image of paradise and that Thomil’s unbelief is why he sees horror.
Thomil turns Sciona’s own reasoning against her and asks what she truly saw. He then pushes her toward a more dangerous conclusion by asking why the Forbidden Coordinates form a perfect circle like Tiran’s own barrier. Once Sciona mentally maps the coordinates onto the Kwen, she realizes the pattern fits too well: the best siphoning zones correspond to living, fertile regions. Horrified, Sciona protests that Tiran and its founders could not have built their civilization on human deaths, but Thomil answers that the city already treats Kwen labor as disposable, so magical consumption is only a more literal version of the same cruelty.
The argument escalates into mutual insults. Sciona calls Thomil savage and ungrateful; Thomil accuses Sciona of blindness and hypocrisy. Sciona slaps Thomil, and Thomil surges forward, forcing Sciona back against the wall. When Sciona reaches for her defensive cylinder, Thomil seizes her hand and presses it against his chest, demanding that she kill him if that is what a proper Tiranish mage does once a Kwen is no longer useful. Sciona, crying and cornered, falls back on religious certainty and says Thomil’s people died because they deserved it. Thomil rejects that belief as delusion, shoves her hand away, and leaves her alone in collapse.
Desperate to prove Thomil wrong, Sciona rushes back to her office, shuts out Renthorn’s taunts, and sets up a spellograph. She maps to a familiar sourcing pool at the edge of the common coordinates and is astonished to see a distant ocean shore populated by unfamiliar black-haired people gathering shells. The scene’s beauty restores her hope for a moment; Sciona convinces herself that a God capable of making such wonders would never allow His mages to take human life. Certain that this new vision will disprove Thomil, Sciona activates the siphoning spell.
Instead, Sciona watches a young woman on the shore ignite in white light and begin to unravel. Sciona screams, tries to abort the spell, burns herself, and finally tears the spellpaper free, causing an explosion that stops the siphoning. The mapping coil remains active long enough for Sciona to see the victim still alive but catastrophically mutilated, surrounded by grieving companions as blood spreads through the shallows. Realizing that her brief burst of fire in Tiran has been purchased with a stranger’s ruined life, Sciona can only sob apologies as the girl dies before her eyes.
Who Appears
- Sciona Freynanhighmage who argues with Thomil, tests a source herself, and confirms the deadly truth about siphoning
- ThomilKwen assistant who recognizes Blight, recounts his family’s deaths, and forces Sciona to face the coordinates’ meaning
- Unnamed shell-gathereryoung coastal woman remotely mutilated by Sciona’s siphoning experiment, proving sourcing kills distant humans
- Renthorncoworker who briefly taunts Sciona as she rushes back to her office in panic