The Maid
by Nita Prose
Contents
Chapter 11
Overview
Molly rushes her morning work, ignores pressures from Cheryl, and slips out at lunch to pawn Charles Black’s jeweled wedding ring for cash, entrenching her complicity. Sunitha’s cryptic warning and a remembered “hive” lecture from Mr. Snow frame Molly’s isolation, while Mr. Preston’s past reassurance steadies her resolve.
Summary
Molly hides the gun in her vacuum and tucks Charles Black’s jeweled ring in her bra while speeding through rooms with a manual sweeper. In the hall, Sunitha startles her and warns that clean surfaces can hide dangers—“the grass is green, but there are snakes in it”—leaving Molly uneasy yet determined to leave early for lunch.
After elevator delays, Molly reaches the basement where Cheryl challenges her speed and productivity. Guided by Gran’s advice not to let bullies push her buttons, Molly asserts her legal right to take a break and leaves. Mr. Preston calls after her as she heads out, hungry and short on money.
On the walk, Molly recalls Mr. Snow’s professional-development lecture about the hotel as a hive and the value of worker bees. Singled out as the model maid, she was mocked by coworkers and froze, until Mr. Preston quietly assured her the hotel’s problems weren’t hers and that he respected her, a memory that now steadies her.
At a nearby shop, Molly sells the jeweled ring, replacing it with a wad of bills tucked near her heart. Doubt flickers, but memories of Mr. Black’s violence quell it. She sees the ring already gleaming in the window display. When the pawnbroker assumes heartbreak, Molly replies that things with “her man” are going very well indeed, masking her deeper entanglement.
Who Appears
- MollyHotel maid and narrator; hides the gun, pawns Charles’s ring for cash, asserts her break, recalls hive lecture.
- Mr. SnowHotel manager; his past “hive mentality” lecture dominates Molly’s flashback and shapes her self-concept.
- CherylAntagonistic housekeeper; questions Molly’s speed and lunch break, prompting Molly to stand up for herself.
- ShopkeeperPawnbroker who buys Charles Black’s jeweled ring, displays it, and misreads Molly’s motives as romantic trouble.
- Mr. PrestonDoorman; checks on Molly’s whereabouts and, in memory, reassures her after the hive lecture.
- SunithaHousekeeper who warns Molly that danger hides beneath clean surfaces, urging caution.
- Charles BlackDeceased guest; his abuse and jeweled wedding ring drive Molly’s decision to pawn it.