Chapter Eleven: That Night. School Daze. Dad Leaves. The Well of the Worlds. The Other. The Old Woman. A Nasty Surprise.
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With his father headed to a retreat, Charlie prepares and descends the well, crossing into a red-poppy Otherworld beneath a gray sky and distant green towers. He meets Dora, a kind, deformed shoemaker who knew Adrian Bowditch and warns the city is dangerous. Charlie notices a language shift. Returning to the shed, he is ambushed at gunpoint by the sing-song intruder.
Summary
At home, Charlie reads Bradbury and talks with his father, who reveals a multiday retreat starting Tuesday. Charlie considers telling him about the well but decides against it, fearing the secret would spread. He dreams of a giant roach under his bed.
On Sunday, Charlie brings Radar to Bowditch’s wrecked house; she searches for her old master and settles upstairs. Alone later, Charlie cleans, restores the bedroom, and reflects on the vandal’s desecration and his own past mischief. He notices a scholarly book about fantasy’s origins and muses on darker fairy-tale roots.
Monday at school, Charlie secures a community service day for Tuesday, mass-emails an Adopt-A campaign, and skims Grimm’s for original, grimmer versions. Distracted in class, he’s called out by Mr. Masensik. Arnetta invites him to study Wednesday, which he accepts.
Tuesday morning, his father leaves; Charlie senses foreboding. After medicating Radar and leaving her at home, he arms himself at Bowditch’s, enters the shed, and uncovers the well. He descends 185 damp, treacherous steps, glimpses a giant roach, and passes through a lightheaded border into another world.
Charlie emerges to red poppy fields, a road, a shoe-hung cottage, and distant green-glass spires. He meets Dora (Deerie), a gray, deformed woman who communicates by gestures and writing. She recognizes Radar as a former puppy, knew Adrian Bowditch, and writes “danger,” urging quiet in the city. Comforted after he breaks down over Radar, Charlie notices he cannot say certain modern words, implying a language shift. Dora shows “AB” carved above her door.
Charlie retraces his steps through the corridor and up the well. As he replaces the boards, a hard circle presses to his head. The sing-song little intruder holds him at gunpoint, promising no harm if he gets what he came for—then chillingly adds, “Ha-ha.”
Who Appears
- Charlie Reade
Narrator; keeps the well secret, explores the Other, meets Dora, seeks help for Radar, ambushed returning.
- Dora (Deerie)
Kind, deformed shoemaker in the Other; knew Adrian Bowditch and Radar; warns the city is dangerous.
- Intruder (sing-song little man)
Likely the burglar; ambushes Charlie in the shed with a gun, demanding what he came for.
- Radar
Aging dog; searches for Bowditch, comforts Charlie by presence; motivation for seeking the sundial.
- George Reade (Charlie’s father)
Announces and departs for a retreat; trust-fall bonding; his absence enables Charlie’s descent.
- Howard (Adrian) Bowditch
Deceased neighbor; his tape guides Charlie; initials carved at Dora’s; past journeys shape the quest.
- Arnetta Freeman
Classmate and former make-out partner; invites Charlie to study on Wednesday.
- Mrs. Silvius
School office staff; grants Charlie a community service day, joking she smells hooky.
- Mr. Masensik
Teacher of America Today; calls on distracted Charlie and signs his slip.
- Ms. Norman
Librarian who provides a Kindle to access Grimm’s Fairy Tales.